Re: FW: web site corrections

[Matthew Dillon <dillon@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

:After realizing I sent this to bugs@, I'm resending here, as it should have
:been done in the first place. Please review my spelling and grammar
:corrections for the web site.
:http://www.speakeasy.org/~cdholden/dragonflybsd/diff-www.txt
:
:	Regards,
:	Chris
 
    Yowzer.  You sure put a lot of commas in there.  There really isn't
    a grammatical standard for those sorts of commas (well, half of them
    anyway), it depends a lot on preference.

    I'll try to pick out the non-comma stuff and put that in.  I'll put in
    some of the commas but not all of them.

					Thanks!

					-Matt
					Matthew Dillon 
					<dillon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>